Vacation for Kids Story

 

Val, Dawn, Joyce and Shellice

First I watch the commercial on TV. Then the commercial said if you win a prize if you open the candy and you get a golden ticket or coins or whatever you get to go on vacation

I am making a story on a girl name Dawn and she saw the commercial and she brought candy until she got the golden coins and final she won and she when on vacation for ever and did not have to go to school ever again.

Dawns Friend Joyce went and got the golden coins and Joyce said I never had to go to school again. Joyce was so happy and told her friend you should tell your parent's to get the candy so you can win the prize.

Dawn said " how did you do it? " Joyce said well I first begged and throw a tantrum my parents and they said " no candy is bad for you!"

  so I did care I just snuck out and went on vacation for kids vacation for kids has games junk food and no adults allowed because adult are to bossy and that means we kids can do want ever we want in that place." see you at Vacation for kids Dawn." said Joyce.

Dawn ask if she can get candy and her Mother named Val said no and she threw the biggest tantrum biggest she was angry at her parents the she snuck out and when to the store and she brought all of the candy she wanted. Her parents were upset at her because they told her not to get any more candy even if she when to the store and got it she just wanted to win the prize.

The parents wanted their daughter to go to school and the the people who worked at the vacation just for children they took the girl any way and the parents where trying to find there daughter.

The cops came and said to their parents where is your daughter the school send me here because she has to go to school buy law and the parents almost got arrested.

The people who worked to the vacation just for kids didn't care about the kids health are them going to school all they care about is what kids like to eat and money. 

Final the Dawn's mother Val and Joyce Mother named Shellice found their daughters and the parents said those people who worked for the vacation for kids are kid nappers and how they kill kids is they let kids eat what all the sugar  and junk food they wanted until they died that is how they make money.

Final Dawn got punished and grounded for 9 months and went to school. Then Joyce Mother Shellice said "where is my baby!" Dawn's Mother Val said "oh do not worry we got Joyce too." and Joyces Mom punish her to.

This story is similar to Willy Wonka but not exactly.